Display full version of the post: Please tell me what do you think of my portfolio

somemamn
10.09.2014, 23:37
please give me an honest feed backhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N5rdvdh4b6Y

John Connor
11.09.2014, 00:28
Some images were very dark.A couple of the designs seemed very simplistic compared to the remainder.  Could they have been done earlier in your career?Judging from the majority of the images we can tell you like....-cylindrical columns-round lights-dark, moody scenes-tile-very tall buildings-swords-large deer headsMany of the images appear to be very similar meaning not a lot of variation.Were these developed with gaming in mind?Thanks for sharing them with us.  I would have liked to see more variety and better executed exterior images (not so dark).  One would think you live in the land of the midnight sun.You seem particularly interested in architectural elements.  What is your background?Was this done for a course you took at university?  What grade did you get?
John Connor2014-09-11 00:30:45

somemamn
11.09.2014, 01:49
Hi;.... I am a designer architect.... Please people view my portfolio and share it with everyone and hopefully subscribe so my channel get more popular among architects.... MY images are at night or dusk time coz thats what I like to design them... I have many in the sunny weather and u can view my videos !!!!!
thankxsomemamn2014-09-11 05:07:32

John Connor
11.09.2014, 11:39
You seemed to have skipped over many of the questions I asked.  Subscribe to your channel?  Why?  Are you seeking a job?  Are you self-employed or do you work for an architectural firm?  If you work for an architectural firm which one is it?What major projects have you worked on specifically?Of the projects you have worked on can you provide us with images (digital photos) of the finished work so we can compare your design to what was actually built?

somemamn
11.09.2014, 12:44
Hi there,I work as a designer architect for houses only... but those big projects are just imaginer y... I like to design something real big to try to run away from my presence... Its all just to test my 3d abilities no more no less.... I work with a local company in Quebec, Canada. we just design 2 or one storey houses.... Thanks... what do you think of this video?my fried moe made it. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yMhNWtd8J_4

John Connor
11.09.2014, 13:26
I am currently unable to view the video.  Perhaps later.If you are trying to impress other architects wouldn't it be a good idea to include images of actual projects you have worked on and photographs of the finished work for comparison?  I would think that the combination of real work examples and imagination/fantasy examples would better serve your purposes.Where did you do your studies?I feel a little more variety in your portfolio would be a plus.Your profile says Angola but you are actually in Canada.  Were you born in Angola and moved to Canada?
John Connor2014-09-11 13:27:27

John Connor
11.09.2014, 14:49
Hmmmm.....where did you go?Assuming you are shopping your portfolio around in the hopes of getting a better paying job I have some suggestions for big, imaginative projects that might be of interest to a wide variety of architects.  These would be such things as....Municipal/government buildings (ex. - administrative offices)Municipal service buildings (ex. - water treatment plants)AirportsMuseumsConvention centersEntertainment complexes (ex. - concert halls)Sports centers/stadiums (ex. a velodrome or soccer stadium)University dormitory or a school building (classrooms)Shopping mallThese types of projects are numerous and done world-wide so you would make yourself open to more responses from all over the world.  In other words try to appeal to the widest possible audience that you can to increase your chances for gaining new employment.
John Connor2014-09-11 14:51:06

John Connor
16.09.2014, 18:16
So, has your video gone viral yet?I guess "moe" from Angola by way of Ontario, Canada has given up.  Maybe he'll return again next year.  I fear his dream of getting hired as an architect will go unfulfilled.

John Connor2014-09-17 13:55:15

somemamn
05.10.2014, 00:30
Hello...I am not disappointed or my dreams were not unfulfiled wherever!Aight, Moe is me I am fooling people around and I know if someone is after grade 1 she/he would know that moe is me... Yeah!!!!!I just dont put my concentration on youtube anymore...it just happened I uploaded one time!!!!!I will leave the link here for the best textuing tutorial ever so learners could benefit hopefully!!!!!!!!!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4SWScrRz5HkI left my job I used to work at because my co worker whom she loved me she left and got a boy friend...watever, my heart is broken and i am all again to start a new job searcch!!!! wish me the luck....

John Connor
05.10.2014, 14:05
And the saga continues.  Good luck in your search for a job and a new love.

John Connor
07.10.2014, 12:05
Re: YouTube video.251 views as of this morning (10-Oct-2014) and only two comments if you don't count the first one by the OP who refers to himself as The PersistenT.  It does not seem to have reached "viral" stage yet.  Clearly there is something amiss.  The questions is "What?"  Keep trying Moe.
John Connor2014-10-07 12:06:12